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Hi Robert,
This is very inspired composition. Certainly it is a heart shadow of the wedding ring. Also nice idea to put it in the Bible book.
Well done!
TFS, Stefan
Hello my Friends,
Browsing on the TLS pages I couldn't help myself to admire this one.
First of all the view point is very interesting and then the composition is following in the same perfect line. Nice capture of the street lights against the evening natural light.
Very well done!
TFS, Stefan
Hey Michel,
The picture is lovely. Everything have been said before me. Personally I'm speachless.
Very well done!
TFS, Stefan
Hello Apu,
This is a nice picture. Good sense of perspective and good light you've captured. I know how difficult is to work with low light so in my opinion you've done a good job here.
TFS, Stefan
Hi Deepak,
Welcome to TLS. Hope you'll enjoy this journey in photography world and find useful people's comments.
This picture is quite good in light and colours. As composition, I think it can be improved by rule of thirds. Also, the horizont line is not straight and this can be improved as well. I will leave you a sample in workshop. Good Light! Stefan
Hi Rochelle,
This one I like more as you succeeded to capture the fine contour in contrast of the cheek and for the nice view point you choose.
Regards, Stefan
Hi Dustein,
You captured a nice portrait, with very expressive eyes and sensual lips, so clear and sharp.
I wonder what lens you used to get f/1 stop.
Well done! TFS.
Stefan
Hi Rochelle,
Welcome to TLS. Nice begining with a self portrait.
First of all I would recommend you to save the EXIF information [exposure, shutter speed, ISO and staff like this] or to enter manually, in order to receive coherent feedback, which I think you look for.
Black and White give opportunity to contrast and contours, such eyes, lips, face contour and you captured them pretty good.
Good luck!
Regards,
Stefan
Salut Costi,
Da, cunosc locul si este o reprezentare fidela a ceea ce a fost candva una din portile Salonicului. Ideea ar fi fost mai interesanta sa alegi un unghi mai dinamic. Asa lucrarea are sensul unei perspective in trei dimensiuni prin incadrare in interiorul arcului si suprapunere cu blocul din spate. Personal imi pare cam statica.
Altfel este un inceput bun. Succes! Stefan

Hi Luc,
You have captured very well the moment.
Still your shadow is projected over the subject and that is something that you should be aware of and avoid it in the future.
Take care. Stefan