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toni_ro Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 20 W: 8 N: 52] (214) [2007-03-22 2:17] - [workshop] [compare] [+]

Salut Anca,
Ce frumoasa e rugaciunea asta!
Din punct de vedere compozitional, ai reusit sa prezinti nu numai rugaciunea ca un dialog cu Dumnezeu, ci si legatura dintre lumea vazuta (reprezentata in prim plan) si cea nevazuta (sugerata de spatiul prelucrat in photoshop). Zidul din spatele stranei (ca toate zidurile pictate din bisericile noastre) nu desparte cele doua lumi, ci le aduce impreuna, ingaduind Liturghiei ceresti si celei pamantesti sa se savarseasca simultan.
Aceeasi "trecere" intre lumi o regasesc si in modul in care e luminata fatza fetei.
Felicitari pentru expunerea reusita, din cate imi amintesc pronaosul e destul de intunecat la Cozia.
Imi place foarte mult poza asta... si o adaug la favorite :)
An incercat sa amplific putin diferenta dintre cele doua "lumi" intr-un workshop rapid, sper sa-ti placa.
Cu bine,
Toni.

toni_ro Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 20 W: 8 N: 52] (214) [2007-03-21 23:49]

Hi Ursula,
This photo is full of hope!
I like the POV and the way the divergent branches seem to burst out of the frame, revealing such an amazing secret: Life.
We still have plenty of snow in Quebec, but your photo reminded me that green leaves will come up soon :)
TFS,
Toni.

toni_ro Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 20 W: 8 N: 52] (214) [2007-03-13 20:43] - [workshop] [compare]

Hi Petr,
I don't know if your model was really feeling like being in girl's paradise, but I've never been in a cotton field. Perhaps that's why I like this picture, which looks like a movie scene. I like the wide format you used for the composition, but I would have placed the subject more to the left. I hope you don't mind the quick workshop ;)
TFS,
Toni.

toni_ro Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 20 W: 8 N: 52] (214) [2007-03-13 1:22] [+]

Hello Johan,
Very well composed picture!
It's like a spooky representation of the passageway between worlds. In the mythology of many cultures the realms of the afterlife are separated by water from our world. The ghostly reflections of the trees and the "mysterious IR-filter" are amplifying the feeling of "transition".
Congratulations and TFS,
Toni.

toni_ro Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 20 W: 8 N: 52] (214) [2007-03-13 0:36] [+]

Hi Dayna,
The few colors you left in this composition suggest that you haven't lost all hope. I think this is an important step in getting help....even if, in the end, it only comes from yourself.
I like the photo, to me, it's like the funny side of deception. It's good to deal with emotions in a creative way (I'm quite familiar with that behavior :D) and I wish you well.
With hope,
Toni.

toni_ro Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 20 W: 8 N: 52] (214) [2007-03-11 1:39]

Hello Robert,
This picture has beautiful color combination and lighting.
The bollard (I learned a new word today) seems to wave goodbye to the beautful reflecting ship, who is leaving with his little blue friend :) Nice "family photo"!
The ship's name reminds me of a river which "flows" often through my memories.
TFS,
Toni.

toni_ro Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 20 W: 8 N: 52] (214) [2007-03-10 23:11]

Hi Alain,
I like the power of beauty (or beautiful power) through which these tiny snowflakes changed the appearance of an ordinary "balcony scene"... and determined you to share with us this wonderful picture.
Thanks,
Toni.

toni_ro Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 20 W: 8 N: 52] (214) [2007-03-10 22:24] [+]

Hi Patrick,
I like the colors in this picture... and the Doors :D (perhaps also the fact that I experimented some shots in similar spots on the shore of the Saint-Laurent river)
The composition seems a bit "crowdy", I would have left a single girl to stand for "a thousand girls" (perhaps the one from the left side or, even better, the one in the contemplative mood, from the right)... but that's just me :)
Regards,
Toni.

toni_ro Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 20 W: 8 N: 52] (214) [2007-03-03 23:56]

Hi Robert,
This is a very "warm" picture. First I thought the colors were the cause, but after reading your note, I realized that the warmth doesn't come from chromatic saturation or sunny beaches, it comrs from a heart that beats, somewhere... in a crowd of attentive teddies.
Thanks for sharing happiness among childrens' souls and... this photo with us :)
Toni

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Danert Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 437 W: 18 N: 804] (4076)

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toni_ro Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 20 W: 8 N: 52] (214) [2007-03-03 23:00] [+]

Hello Daniel,
I like how you captured the two skaters, inclined in the same direction, this way the curve of the skating path enhances the "motion" provided by them to your composition.
Nice background, good contrasting colors and well sharpened.
TFS,
Toni