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(2122) [2009-08-08 16:05]
(2122) [2009-08-08 16:05] Hi Harout -
Excellent idea and very dramatic subject. However, I think the contrast is too high and the "hot" spot on the circular building is distracting. It draws the eye but looks too over exposed. Nice shot. I'd love to see it before you did the post processing.
David
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(2122) [2008-12-19 7:56]
(2122) [2008-12-19 7:56] You're on to some really interesting composition ideas Christian. Especially like the lines in this photo. The b/w makes it work even better. I like the contrast . . . rich blacks and popping whites. Well done.
tsumeb
(2122) [2008-09-02 18:05]
(2122) [2008-09-02 18:05] Nice portrait Muhammad. Love the color contrast between his face and the other elements of the photo. Well done!
Very cool Antoine. Wonderful composition. Que belle!