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witness1 Silver Note Writer [C: 8 W: 0 N: 16] (141) [2007-08-26 21:17]

Hi kenan, The POV and the idea are Great!, but the photo is moved, and it has too much grain... you should try to edit it or take it. hehe

Fernando

witness1 Silver Note Writer [C: 8 W: 0 N: 16] (141) [2007-08-23 6:43]

hey Welcome to TL

Very nice Photo. i really really good.
I would say a little sharpening would be better.

Is it a ¨LensBabies¨ or a radial blur??

Keep Shootin´

Fernando

(i agree with snap, a note would be great)

witness1 Silver Note Writer [C: 8 W: 0 N: 16] (141) [2007-08-23 6:37]

Welcome to Treklens

Nice Photo, but i think its too saturated. It would look bette with less saturation and more contrast

Keep Shootin`

Fernando

witness1 Silver Note Writer [C: 8 W: 0 N: 16] (141) [2007-08-17 23:58]

nice photo! very well seen. i love the texture...and the diferent tones of the blue.

Congrats

Fernando

witness1 Silver Note Writer [C: 8 W: 0 N: 16] (141) [2007-08-17 23:54]

wooohh thats nice, nice movemet, and specially Nice background color and the detail of the is great.

witness1 Silver Note Writer [C: 8 W: 0 N: 16] (141) [2007-08-17 7:18] [+]

As the last photo i commented, too much contrast. you should try to lower te contrasts.
like it is, its difficult to realize exactly what it is.

Nice photo anyway.

(thes is a technique to do what i think you are trying in photoshop. duplicate the layer, set the layer in overlay and change the colors to BnW. then play with the transparency of the layer. try to make it undestandable and without too much contrast.)

witness1 Silver Note Writer [C: 8 W: 0 N: 16] (141) [2007-08-17 7:12]

hello geno:

this is a great photo. did u edited it?

I would say it has too much contrast. the bright parts are too lighted and the shadows are too dark.

its somehow difficult to know where the focus is.

You shold do some edition here, less contrast, a litle bit of Sat (+) and les brightnes. Anyway its a fantastic picture.

Hope it helps

Fernando

witness1 Silver Note Writer [C: 8 W: 0 N: 16] (141) [2007-08-15 15:54] [+]

wow. Very nice contrasts! and as rychousmama said, incredible that you posted this photo in BnW. I Say it was a great call! do u have it in colors? it would be nice to have a look, if you have, post it as a workshop...plz hehe xD

love the fading background.

Fernando

witness1 Silver Note Writer [C: 8 W: 0 N: 16] (141) [2007-08-15 15:49] [+]

hahaha i took the same pic...hmmm almost hehe. "HPP in Florence"

incredible view, beautiful countrie, congratulations hahaha

andaaa congrats for the photo. shame its so small :(

witness1 Silver Note Writer [C: 8 W: 0 N: 16] (141) [2007-08-15 15:29]

hahahaha very nice pick...nice catch(a dirty one...but it makes a great photo, so who gives a damn)

Well taken

Fernando