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Hello! Your picture has many interesting points. The tones are warm and it gives a good feeling. There are interesting details too, but I think you sould have post a bigger photo... The subject is so interesting, it deserves a bit more.
Thanks for sharing!
MW
Hi! I'm not sure B&W is the best way to present this photograph... Even though this locomotive is old, I think the whole thing would look nicer in colors.
I would have tried to change the point of view, so we wouldn't see the big white (and not so interesting) building as a background.
TFS!
MW
Interesting shapes! The photoshopping on the red box is too obvious though...
You should have tried to make the picture perfectly symetrical, instead of 'almost'.
TFS!
MW
It first looked like a fruit. Nice colors!
I would have erased the little dots (little lights) and the pink one, at the right.
TFS!
MW
There are a few problems with your picture... First, the border, it's kitch and doesn't fit to the subject. I think you should have used a more simple border.
The second problem is your composition. The trees are distracting from the subjet (it would have been OK if at least I could see one complete tree, not only a few leafs..).
It's important to remember that a good subject in your picture doesn't necessarily make the picture grat!
Thanks for sharing anyway! ;)
MW

H! I think it's a bit too cropped, we don't even see all the helmet. However, your subject was well exposed, reflections in the helmet are a big plus!
Well done!
MW