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Copyright: Jan Vranken (Mangoman) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 179 W: 9 N: 81] (829)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-04
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Fujifilm Finepix S5600
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-08-11 11:33
Viewed: 202
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Just a photo I found cleaning up my files.
The Coca Cola plant in Luanda Angola. Streetscene

Makes me think of my stay overthere.......those where the days !

Jan
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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1403 W: 0 N: 1709] (13741)
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Ik vin em prima Jan,leuke frisse kleuren alleen die meiden zijn een beetje bewogen lijkt het wel of beik nou gek.


jan

A very journalistic shot here Jan - subject was excellent, eye catching, colourful, and definitely a "photogrpher's photograph."

A few tiny niggles - the subjects are either affected my motion blur or lack of sharpness, not sure which. There is a tiny sliver of orphaned signwriting at the upper left corner that could easily be cropped or cloned, likewise with the fraction of the "G" on the right. And in my personal opinion only, the frame is excessive, there doesn't seem to be any compelling reason to have the red band around the shot.

My thoughts! I do like the pic overall.

Rew

Hello Jan :)

Nice shot full of colours. Great subject, street shots are the best in my opinion.
It shows well the big difference between those two worlds ... TFS
Greetings
Marylou :)

Hello Jan

Nice image of the famous Coca Cola sign. I also like the image itself. Nice capture of the locals.

Regards
Jimmy

très beau cadrage, couleurs pour une composition très équilibrée,

merci Jan

dd, île de la Réunion

Hi Jan,

Nice shot, I love the red color and the ground texture.
The red frame is not necessary to me.
You should definitely crop the image to erase the small black part on the left, as well as the end of the "g" on the right.

cheers

david

Hi Jan, this is a very nice photo of these children for their daily life. You make it more extra ordinarily by having a good background with them. Well done. Sothy

Compostie en kleur zijn geweldig
ook de inhoud
scherpte zit op de muur niet op de mensen
maar zeker heel heel mooi

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