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Smile
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Copyright: Francisco Alguacil Diez (fraldi) (100)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-12-28
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/3.2, 1/60 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-02-05 14:23
Viewed: 349
Points: 5
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Hello Francisco
Great photo
The eyes are fantastic
My regards
sergio

Great smiles!

Some room for improvement i think.
The photo looks washed out as if it was over exposed. The sky is burned out and completely white. This is not really a problem for me but it does mean that the sky in the photo was over exposed.

In my opinion it would have been even better if you had used a more narrow aperture and had both the boys in focus.

I did a workshop to try and add some more contrast and sharpen it a bit.

Oh, a note about the photo would be nice

Cheers,
Jens

Hi Francisco!

I really like this shot, it pulled me in immediately! It was funny, but I, too, tried enhancing contrast, darkened it a bit and increased saturation a bit until I got it the way I liked it...then I went to the workshop and saw Jan had done exactly the same thing and had arrived a pretty much the same result!

Anyway, great shot, very relaxed and happy.

-K

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