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Final Destination


Final Destination
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Copyright: sherif karas (sherif) (75)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-04-24
Exposure: f/3.7, 1/20 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-05-09 11:51
Viewed: 641
Points: 6
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To christiangrosch: Thankssherif 1 05-10 15:17
To nsrq: Hisherif 1 05-10 15:15
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  • nsrq Gold Star Critiquer [C: 171 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2006-05-09 12:10]
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Hi Sherif, very nice work. Interesting how the boat is leaning. The sky is very dramatic sky. I'd like to know how you achieved it, ie what post-processing did you apply.
I wouldn't put your website address in the picture. I'd rather put it in the note.
Regards
Nilton

Wooooooww!!

Wonderful shot, great composition!
Very soft, congratulations!

Agreed with most everything that nsrq has to say, and I underline his comment that text in the image is no more than distracting. Not a good idea at all.
Secondly, while I admire the use of a fat black frame, there is a need to introduce a very thin white line somewhere. See other contributors for examples?
All that said, dramatic it certainly is and the tilted boat is a masterstroke. Very pleasing to see a level horizon, as so many are not. If it were my decision, and it's not, I would be very tempted to sacrifice some of the sky with a crop to lift the centred horizon upwards. Right now it's centred? Shame to lose that sky!

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