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...Cast Away...


...Cast Away...
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Copyright: Suhailah J Nassar (suhailah) Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 23 W: 2 N: 63] (287)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-08-17
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Architecture, Artwork, Decisive Moment, Experimental, Mood
Camera: Panasonic Lumix DMC-FX01
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/800 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-08-20 0:39
Viewed: 533
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
was having a walk at the beach when i came across this random bulky block of bricks...
probably an extra from some building material nearby...

i placed the camera on the floor close to it, and slightly tilted the camera upwards, to get more of the sea and the horizon in the background,
i shot it from many angles, and this was the best one in my opinion

PP : straightend the horizon line, tuned up the colors slightly, added focal B&W effect size 99% sharpness 1%.
[i used a software called Picasa from Google, as i dont have photo shop on this pc]

let me know what u think
and hope u like it =)
im all open to any comments and suggestions, as they will help me alot...

thanks 4 passin by =)
Suhailah Nassar

P.S
thanks muhammad for suggesting the name for this photo [i usualy have problem with gettign a name that suits a photo well] =)
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To mark25: thank yousuhailah 1 08-21 00:12
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salam suhailah :)

how about calling it 'cast away' or 'deserted' or 'abandoned' or even, 'sea of emptiness' :)

i like your effort and ideas you tried to get this shot, really useful for a photographer :)

if i ever got a chance, i'll inshallah teach you a couple of useful things regarding framing, composition etc :)

smile now :)

muhammad muhsin

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  • mcnk Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 129 W: 11 N: 89] (743)
  • [2007-09-07 10:40]

The colours here are beautiful. It is a shame that the slab of stone is not more in focus. The majority of the photo is out of focus which is a shame.
Mike

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