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Critiques [Translate]
- Jonela
(2779) - [2009-07-08 2:37]
Hi Patrick,
This is a good shot the dust behind shows where the horse and cart have come from but would have been better in my opinion if you had left space on the right. This gives the idea of space for the cart to move into. The point of view is good the colours are ok the details are not very sharp imo and your lack of notes lets you down also, for info on that go to notes guidelines.
Regards
Jon
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