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time to say hello


time to say hello
Photo Information
Copyright: Swiatek Wojtkowiak (nygus) Silver Note Writer [C: 4 W: 0 N: 12] (383)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-09
Categories: Portrait
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-12-16 22:29
Viewed: 947
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
i thought it would be nice to introduce myself first so I start here with self portrait
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  • bebu Gold Star Critiquer [C: 272 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-12-16 22:44]

Hello Swiatek,
Welcome to TL. Impressive introduce, especially your beard.

Bebu

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  • nova Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2735 W: 263 N: 864] (8653)
  • [2005-12-16 22:48]

Very good first post,Swiatek! Very interesting composition! Welcome to TL! This is a nice,original and creative self portrait! Michel

Swiatek,
Interesting compostion. Strong color as well. I was alittle disapointed that your necklace is cropped off, as that could give some more information in this somewhat mysterious pitures.

Dear Swiatek, welcome to TL!
This one goes well with "Paul Indigo's" latest no eyes portrait shot. I like the good use of DOF here and the composition is interesting too, I would like to know who is it... The background I'm not so sure about, maybe too "hectic" with the diagonals. Anyway very nice first entry and I'm looking forward to more pictures from you. Very well done. Yours, Jan
P.S. I have exactly the same shirt ;-)

Hello Swiatek and welcome to TL ;o)

It's an interesting self portrait. I like the tight crop and short depth of field focusing on your mouth as you have something to anouce: your entry in TL community :o)
Colors and light are great. Did you post-processed the pic? Whith which camera do you work?
Well, hope you'll enjoy TL life!
Take care,
Prisley

Hi Swiatek - Nice intro - unsual crop with an interesting 'crop'. Welcome to TL and look forward to such out of the box postings.
Mukesh

Hi Swiatek,
I like the crop a lot, makes a very interesting self portrait. Well done
Fred
PS : Welcome to TL :)

Nice to meet you ; Welcome to TL. I like the unusual tight cropping and strong colors in the shot. Good presentaitin..
Elif

Swiatek ,
good cropping,and so nice color arrangements.a perfect exposure,warm tones here.
regards

Czesc Swiatku,
Wybralam to zdjecie, bo to jakbym mowila bezposrednio do ciebie a o zdjeciach. Fajne sa one, nie powiem, a widze (dopiero po przejrzeniu twojego profilu na TE - swietny), ze robisz zdjecia na "czuja". Wydaje mi sie, ze sa takie bardziej reportazowe niz wymuskane (na TL panuje raczej moda na muskanie i udziwnianie). Dlatego nawet sklonna jestem cofnac to, co napisalam na niebieskim zdjeciu.
Milo sobie ogladac twoje woyaze. Gdzie teraz pomkniesz?

Do milego ogladania,
Anna

very sexy :)

Great self-portrait in your style, nice initiative to begin with it ... it had already given the tone !
Sylvie

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