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Postcard from Senegal


Postcard from Senegal
Photo Information
Copyright: Mark Pople (span) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 23 W: 0 N: 19] (144)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-11-30
Categories: Artwork
Camera: Canon 30 D
Exposure: f/4, 1/250 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-12-21 1:08
Viewed: 1173
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
At the most Western point of africa(N'gor) local art put up onto a wall.

i was trying to get some depth in this image, each time i walked past this Graff i wanted to capture it, this pose by the model was on the spur and was not prompted by me,

so this captures a planned piece with a impromptu model posing.
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Hello Mark! Interesting composition. Original contrast. Very sophisticated portrait. Good take. Well done!

Well, she did a great job. It's nicely metered, with slightly oddball composition but works well.
Rew

Bonjour Mark
Joli modèle et surtout belle photo avec une très bonne composition avec ces grafittis en 1er plan

Amicalement
Sylvain

Hi Mark, A saucy pose, and good clarity and colour. She can make an old wall look OK. TFS. Murray.

Hello Mark,

Beautiful girl and good photograph.
I did a WS and I hope you like it!
Besta regards,
Sergio

:) I'll be back tomorrow with the green faces!

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1398 W: 0 N: 1695] (13695)
  • [2007-12-22 9:40]

You succeated very well Mark!
jan

The impromptu is a HIT
Depth is okay as well :)
Great photo of a great place
Did you have the dibi on the beach ?

Jan

Howdy Mark!
Beautiful girl, nice smile. Interesting wall. Very good composition. Good take. Regards!

Hello Mark

nice compostion, and your model is cute, but I would have prefered to see her feet as well.

TFS

Olivier

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  • taba Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 425 W: 163 N: 314] (2041)
  • [2008-02-22 4:16]

Hi Mark

nice cpature and composition...
the girl seems to be very confortable on the model way...

good BG and the only thing that I think you could did is a PP to clear a bit the girl´s face...
well done

Taba

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