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Photo Information
Copyright: Sylvie Fondacci Monteiro (SylFondacci) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2000 W: 307 N: 1512] (14127)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-06-24
Categories: Daily Life, Action
Camera: Canon AE-1 Program, 35-70 f/3.5-4.5
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Three weeks in Dakar [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-07-05 15:16
Viewed: 894
Points: 7
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
On the beach of Soumbedioune in Dakar.

In the background, the island of snakes.
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To salil: :))SylFondacci 2 07-09 06:01
To erdna: Thanks !SylFondacci 1 07-07 06:04
To jeffsurepix: 2 shots ?SylFondacci 1 07-05 15:34
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Two interesting subjects I have seen here. First the boatmen and the waves, which fits to your photo title. The second one is the snake island ( as you have mentioned )and the still boats. If you have seperated these two your images would be much stronger. Cheers.

Jeffrey

hello sylve
Une composition parallele, vague, barques, tout est au rendez-vous pour donner envie de s'y trouver.
Beau sujet
jp

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  • erdna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 629 W: 68 N: 746] (5421)
  • [2006-07-06 10:43]
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As I looked at your thumbnail photo, I thought that this was a collage of horizontally formatted pictures. Looking at the big photo, I realized that it is all in one original photograph! This is a photo with lots of interesting details. The boat with the paddling people would have been very impressive on a closer shot.

Regards,
Andre'

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  • salil Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 581 W: 18 N: 295] (2106)
  • [2006-07-06 11:13]
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Dynamism is enhanced by the still boats in the background. Good image.
Salil

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