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Elle


Elle
Photo Information
Copyright: Sylvie Fondacci Monteiro (SylFondacci) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2000 W: 307 N: 1512] (14127)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-04-14
Categories: Decisive Moment, Mood
Exposure: f/4, 1/20 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Ndiouck, a Woman of Senegal [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-04-24 14:41
Viewed: 1237
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 34
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Taken in Dakar, district of Grand Yoff, the day I was leaving for Paris ...

Natural light, turned to sepia.
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Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To orkhan: Merci ! :)SylFondacci 2 10-29 12:50
To buzdovan: ThxSylFondacci 1 05-04 05:56
To Tamtidelam: Merci !SylFondacci 1 04-27 11:00
To nunenik: Hey ! :)SylFondacci 7 04-25 02:43
To Pioforsky: Gracias :)SylFondacci 1 04-24 15:36
To lollie: :))SylFondacci 1 04-24 15:26
To bombilla: Thx !SylFondacci 3 04-24 15:16
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Critiques [Translate]

She? It's an attractive portrait with good light and a strong composition. I think the focus is a bit off, but it still makes an impression. -Hugh

Et Hop encore un portrait fabuleux!
Bravo Sylvie.

Steph.

You had one called "Him", now it's "Her". You're filling in the series :)
A very nice portrait of someone we've already seen before. I must say it looks just as good in sepia.
A symbolic pose, looking to the left [my left, not hers] ;)
All looks great!!!
Nuné

Hola Sylvie!
De nuevo es tan cercana esta imagen, tan cercana en sentimiento. Es puro sentimiento de amistad :)
Un abrazo
Edén

Lovely use of the available light, with her features in shadow and her cheek lit - and the focus, too, less on her fatures - it adds an unusual kind of softness and mystery to the photo.
She looks a little sad.
TFS
Rew

bonjour dear sylvie
beautiful black white portrait picture.
well done.best regards.
gürkan akçakır.

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  • pemi71 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 539 W: 13 N: 59] (2619)
  • [2007-04-24 17:31]

Hello Sylvie ,
Great composition captured
fantastic portrait full of emotion
and also great frame.
well done!

Petar

magnifique portrait
bien, la façon de cadrer...
chouette photo
jo

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  • gnc Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 738 W: 10 N: 104] (1449)
  • [2007-04-25 0:42]

Nice portrait.
cheers,
Cristian

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3563 W: 737 N: 2401] (19058)
  • [2007-04-25 6:36]

Wonderful portrait.
Great capture and pp; congrats !

v

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  • BenF Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 299 W: 0 N: 341] (3049)
  • [2007-04-25 14:32]

Hi Sylvie,
Very nice portrait. Works perfect in B&W(sepia)
I like the angle from which you take thew shot.
Well done,
BEn

hi Sylvie,
Great in sepia ! Great crop and compo. Just perfect and beautiful.
greetings, inn

Un magnifique portrait où on voit toute sa beauté dans son regard!
Bravo Sylvie, bien réussi,
Dany

wondeful composed portait
i like the sepia colour
good one sylvie
Tfs
M

As chocholate!

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  • gbeli (86)
  • [2007-06-13 12:49]

Hello Sylvie
Your portrait is just perfect.
Regards

tres tres beau portrait ... !
une femme fière et belle, et elle a bien raison de l'être

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