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10-21 01:05 |
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Henk,
Your composition is nice. You may profit from more light and contrast.
Cheers,
Wellington
- mayurb
(105) - [2009-10-19 21:45]
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hi Henk,
i agree with Wellington. a silhouette might have worked better..i would have liked to see how an introduction of a character would've changed the shot..also i think a fiery sky would've added drama to your story
regards
Mayur
i like the composition but not the colours. mayur was correct regarding the silhouette idea.
i have done a ws to give you idea of what could be done.
- alin-m
(1081) - [2009-10-21 6:19]
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Wonderfull composition.Verry nice immage.Regards.Alin.