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Healthy Breakfast


Healthy Breakfast
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Copyright: Niel Muller (docdexter) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 200 W: 0 N: 110] (661)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-12-10
Categories: Food
Camera: Nikon D80, Nikkor AF-S DX 18-135mm ED
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/125 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-12-13 4:55
Viewed: 451
Points: 11
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is another shot of my recent foray into the Macro world.
I sat there one morning eating my own home-made muesli, with oats and nuts and all that healthy stuff, and I thought it looked quite good...
I added the spoon to give it a bit of perspective, but I'm not sure if it adds to or detracts from the overall picture.
What do you all think?

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Bonjour,
Idée originale.
Bonne journée
clnaef

  • Good 
  • Ivan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 474 W: 92 N: 246] (3345)
  • [2006-12-13 6:25]

Hi Niel,
IMO, the spoon take to much place and it is too centered. Putying it in a corner, showing just a part of it, maybe a little bit off fucus would have complete the composition without taking all the place. The definition and luminosity is almost perfect. Have a nice day,
Ivan

nice shot Niel ! Feel like having breakfast again ;-) !
kisanlove
myriam

I like it in the middel. Well done. There is enough lines to lead around in the pic
I think for a closeup, this is an excellent effort

  • Great 
  • bemawu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 103 W: 69 N: 70] (1488)
  • [2007-02-06 19:30]

Hi Neil. Good shot. The spoon adds a strong centre of attraction and without it it would have been quite ordinary. Its a matter of personal taste, but maybe if the spoon was angled a bit it would have been a stronger composition. However, as it is, a good one.

  • Great 
  • Niva Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 844 W: 0 N: 381] (5469)
  • [2007-04-17 10:40]

A great and healthy macro Niel!
Health for the entire world!
Health for South Africa, health for Brazil !
Greetings,
Nivaldo

Hi Niel,
The spoon adds to the picture, thats for sure.
Next time, use a new spoon with no scratches. :-)
I'm not sure it is healthy. I do eat it too, but I'm still growing older, so it doesn't keep me young...... :-()
Nice photo with good colors.
greetings,
Joop!

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