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Hidden face
Photo Information
Copyright: Marek Grudnik (brodek) (99)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-09-10
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Nikon Coolpix 5700, Nikkor ED 35-280mm F2.8-10.3, 72mm polarizer
Exposure: f/4.8, 1/272 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-09-15 0:28
Viewed: 1133
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
One of women in caravan on the desert...
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i think u should be closer on the lady
picture is ok i think but when u get closer and have less background its more powerful

Lovely photo Marek, would be even better with alittle more impact from either contrast and / or saturation, well done though

Hi Marek, Oh how this shot is screaming out for a workshop! Slightly closer crop, lighten the shadow above her eyes, lighten her eyes and add colour to them.
Anyway for your picture, great subject and great point of view. Thanks for sharing.
Bryan

  • Great 
  • Danert Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 437 W: 18 N: 804] (4076)
  • [2007-09-15 11:48]

Hi Marek,
Beautifull portrait, beautifull eyes . Well composed with an excellent choice of DOF . Very sharp with no distraction in the background . Nice work .
Daniel

Great expression. Il like the way she looks at you ...

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