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Genocide
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Copyright: Josh Crozier (Humanist) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 109 W: 39 N: 74] (501)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 1994
Categories: Event
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-04-20 5:36
Viewed: 2760
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I teach secondary students that have been removed from their usual schools. This collage is a submission to one of my classes where we study the genoicde of 1994.

I am posting this at my student's request. He is eager to learn more about design and seeks constructive criticism.
TasmaniaC, Soundsangels, Barber2, Sebastien, josediogo1958 has marked this note useful
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Hi Josh, it is very strange that there has been no comment/critique on this work/issue. I found this work quite powerful in terms of delivering the message it is supposed to.. it is a fact of life, poor will always be poor and will be neglected by the rest of the world in general due to fact that they have nothing to offer in return.. This is a very sensitive issue and this may be the reason for not getting any feedback, I'm not sure.

As far as your student's work is concerned, he has done a very good job and created a silent yet very strong message... well done

wow it's strong collage, dramatic but interesting! for sure it has meaning
well done

When we know that 3/4 of the planet have not enough to eat.....
When we know that this kind of things exist....
The life....is not easy to understand......
Great work on a difficult subjet.....
i am surprise...where are the comments?????
Sorry....
Bravo
Claude

very powerfull i do appreciate your work on the composition, my personal opinion is that the colour could have been replaced by a bw with use of contrast. you might try it some time
still very very touching
emanuela

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  • LuciG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1286 W: 153 N: 729] (8681)
  • [2006-05-13 13:28]

HI JOSH!

Thanks for daring!
It's an impressive work.

A powerful and well designed collage.
Thanks

Hi Josh
What a strange picture but I like it because it touch me in my heart.
The Turtle

Hello Josh
Strong work!!!
I've been there in 1994 (Goma - CRD).
Thanks for the post to remind us 1500000 dead,2000000 refugees,100000 children orphan or alone.
Best regards
JDiogo

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