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The look


The look
Photo Information
Copyright: Allen van Greunen (Fernol) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 39 W: 21 N: 8] (318)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-08-23
Categories: Portrait
Camera: NIKON D-80 DSLR, Sigma 70-300mm F4-5.6 DG Macro
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/40 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-08-25 0:05
Viewed: 195
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This was my second attempt at a model shoot.
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Hi Allen

Good use of a shallow dof & angled, downward pov in this superb portrait. The tight framing works well here. Tfs!

Good points: nice tight framing, good strong eye contact and nice, natural colours in this shot.

Your note doesn't tell much about anything - light source, PP etc., - so my ability to critique is very limited beyond that. I think you may have used your camera's pop-up flash which would explain the pinpoint catchlights in the centre of her eyes?

I also suspect you might have used noise reduction or blur to smoothen her skin?

Rew

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