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Assalamuallaikum Syed,
Beautiful place. Superb contrast. Good details and sharpness.
Shot was nicely composed.
Well done!
TFS,
Happy Fasting Month.
Geoffrey Bin Ramji
- spiker26
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(286) - [2008-09-03 17:33]
Nice colour composition Syed, but that is as far as it goes for me. Let’s stop the back-slapping and get real here.
Let’s face it, visually the foreground is boring and I would have swopped it for a bit of the horizon. The eye gets ‘stuck’ at the top of the picture and wants to see what is above it. Talking about horizon, I just want to know how long it takes for the pool to empty and the hotel sliding into the sea. Needs re-composing, no matter how you cut the cake.
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