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The Fatest Guy in..
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| Photo Information |
Copyright: Muhammad Naseer (naseer-afg)
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 108 W: 6 N: 79]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-n-g.gif) (759) |
| Genre: People |
| Medium: Color |
| Date Taken: 2009-04-30 |
| Categories: Portrait |
| Camera: Olympus C-2100UZ |
| Exposure: f/3.1, 1/30 seconds |
| More Photo Info: [view] |
| Photo Version: Original Version |
| Date Submitted: 2009-07-10 5:25 |
| Viewed: 315 |
| Points: 0 |
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| [Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note |
Hello dear friends,
You view here a very amazing portrait,He is Ali Jan.
He is 21 year old and he live in Daesht-e-Barche in Kabul Afghanistan.He has pass high school in Kabul and now he study Introduction to Law with me at Abraq Institute of Higher Studies.
He is very intellegent in his studies.
All my fellow like Ali jan and same Ali Jan like us...
Thanks for kind visits,
Best Regards,
Mohd Naseer. |
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- Briddl
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 250 W: 81 N: 229]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-g-g.gif)
(934) - [2009-07-10 9:27]
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Hello Muhammad,
you call this an amazing portrait, I call this a snapshot. I am sorry but the background is overexposed and the face out of focus. The image seems to be tilted, there are knees of someone else who shouldn't be in this portrait if it ever was your interest to portrait this young man. The reflection on the table is distracting but here we can see that there should be something like a curtain visible behind the young man.
And, excuse me, but the title you chose for your image doesn't make me even thinking of a portrait of a person you like or who likes you although you state that in your comment.
The expression on his face doesn't convince me that he likes to be exposed to whomever, but I'm quite sure that he doesn't want to be exposed like this to the whole world.
And I hope he is as intelligent as you wrote and will make you delete this "portrait".
Sorry to be that harsh but this is far from everything.
Britta
