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The Door


The Door
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Copyright: Khalil Jalili (LSF_kalil) Silver Note Writer [C: 3 W: 1 N: 16] (280)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-12-21
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Canon EOS Digital Rebel XT, 75-300mm 1:4-5.6 III USM
Exposure: f/9.0, 1/160 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-09-01 3:28
Viewed: 131
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
The outside door of an house in old Herat city (Jewish Getho) , west of Afghanistan, I played with colors just to give it that old look.
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Hello Khalil ,
A very nicely composed image.
Nice color effect given.
Regards
Nazir

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  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2847 W: 263 N: 5945] (23582)
  • [2009-09-04 15:11]

hmmm -- your profile says all your pictures are exactly the way the came out of the camera?
Even your notes say that you "played with the colors just to give it that old look"
In truth, this image does have some potential. HOwever, since the door is supposed to be the centre of attention, I would suggest that you place it on the hitpoint (where the lines of thirds intersect each other.
The colours may have that old look, but I think it could do with a bit more brightness overall.
One final recommendation: this image may very well look better posted at the maximum the site allows: 800 pixels high.
TFS
silke

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