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Innocence


Innocence
Photo Information
Copyright: Apu Kamal (apukamal) (107)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-01-02
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/7.1, 1/100 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-02-19 4:33
Viewed: 236
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Close up of a BD model.....
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To exoticeye: Thanksapukamal 1 02-19 05:14
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Hi Apu,

Nice one! I like the frame!

Cheers,
Ranjith

I like the composition and the cropping of the portrait. The only thing is the hairs should have not covered the rt eye. The soft colors look fine. thamks.

I find the hair across the face very distracting and it covers what should be the main focus of a close up portrait - the model's eyes. The composition is also odd, with the lips being half in and half out of the frame. I don't think that you've done the model justice with this picture unfortunately.

Either u keep the lips or crop it out. I would suggest to keep the lips.

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