Innocence

Critiques [Translate]

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• exoticeye (131)
• [2009-02-19 4:50]
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Hi Apu,

Nice one! I like the frame!

Cheers,
Ranjith

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• shaukatmi (3693)
• [2009-02-19 6:04]

I like the composition and the cropping of the portrait. The only thing is the hairs should have not covered the rt eye. The soft colors look fine. thamks.

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• mortcdz (53)
• [2009-02-19 15:11]

I find the hair across the face very distracting and it covers what should be the main focus of a close up portrait - the model's eyes. The composition is also odd, with the lips being half in and half out of the frame. I don't think that you've done the model justice with this picture unfortunately.

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• aniruddharay (296)
• [2009-02-24 23:25]

Either u keep the lips or crop it out. I would suggest to keep the lips.