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From scrap to ship


From scrap to ship
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Copyright: Finn Jensen (vikingdenmark) (9)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-05-25
Categories: Transportation
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/60 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-10-26 8:25
Viewed: 75
Points: 1
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From scrap in Chittagong to 8.000 t inland ship
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To rewshearer: from scrap to shipvikingdenmark 1 10-27 08:21
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Hi Finn

Your subject is great but I'm not sure that this is so good technically.

Composition could be improved - there is negative space to the left, empty and overexposed sky, that could be either cropped out, or you could have panned the camera right to catch more of the ship's bow.

The man in the foreground doesn't really contribute to the shot - might have been better to wait until he had gone.

I think choosing a more dramatic angle - either side-on, or looking towards the bow - would create a better treatment for this impressive project.

Rew

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