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Bruneian Children 1


Bruneian Children 1
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Copyright: Mohd Rozaimi Hj Abd Rahman (AJ786) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 745 W: 57 N: 1045] (6679)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-02-07
Categories: Daily Life, Friends/Family, Experimental, Mood, Portrait
Camera: Fuji Film S5 Pro, Sigma 70-200 f/2.8 DG EX APO HSM Macro, Hoya UV HMC
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/320 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-02-10 20:45
Viewed: 426
Points: 42
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi Peeps,

Its good to be back after taking a week's break from posting in TL. Me and Anan went to a business premises recently to shoot photo subjects of whereby the premises has Chinese New Year Celebration decorations on display. There were not a lot of interesting subjects to photograph, until our TL friend a.k.a Din came along. We met him there unexpectedly bringing his family to enjoy the decoaration on display. Since, he brought his daughter along, me and Anan decided to ask Din's daughter to post wuth the many decorations on display to practice our potraiture. This is one of the result. I dont know whether its acceptable or not to include the mouse at the BG in terms of composition, but i want to include as much as the environment of which she is standing.. Your critiques on this is greatly appreciated.

TFS

Cheers
AJ786
;-)
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cantik bah bro.. aku suka.. cute anak si din ne mcm cina :) even bg nya pun cantik.. terang si dengan kaler2 yg bright menawan.

regards, terry

Salam Mohd,
I liked colors of your work. Like a rainbow.
Very good balanced composition. Congratulations my friend
Selahattin E

Salam Bro

Awu... batah ku inda meliat post bro... selamat kembali ke TL.... great and nice shots bro, inda sia-sia brother Din bawa anaknya ani.... congrats

Amri HMS

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  • Din (683)
  • [2008-02-11 3:23]

salam bro

tu ya...janjimu telah dikota...tq for sharing. inda sia-sia ku jumpa kamu that day. dapat shot nice smile

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  • lopa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1195 W: 264 N: 877] (8915)
  • [2008-02-11 3:40]

Hi Rozaimi ,
WOOOW!!! Excellent portrait with a great DOF!
Very colourful and bright composition!
Well done my friend!
TFS
Lopa

Hi, Mohd!

Very kind children, nice colours and excellent POV.

TFS,

jazmin

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  • juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2528 W: 0 N: 1019] (14124)
  • [2008-02-11 5:44]

Hola amigo,
simpático retrato colores y agradable pov,
excelentes detalles...
saludos

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  • WMcK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 663 W: 11 N: 1718] (6837)
  • [2008-02-11 5:47]
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I don’t know if there are rules for portraits to include the mouse or not either AJ, but I do know that I think it is a great addition to the sweet image. You have done an excellent job of the little one, with her dancing eyes. I just love all the colour. Well done.
Regards
Wanda

Hello AJ,

Nice shot at this child. Cheery smile with good sharpness and well lit shot.

Regards,
Jusni

Assalamualaikum Bro,

warna yang ngam dengan mood perayaan....merah!
macam si tikus memberi arahan....satu, dua...klik!...heheheh

TFS
Regards
Agoes

Ahaa... akhirnya yang ditunggu-tunggu sudah muncul. Saya sudah lama menunggu shot dari Mi.
Dan bila Mi kembali, sudah tentunya dengan shot yang menarik. Saya suka dengan tema merah di sini. Juga ekspresi wajah si comel yang ceria, sesuai dengan keceriaan warna merah.
Dari segi komposisi, saya rasa saya setuju dengan komposisi Mi seperti ini.
Salam,
Ramdan

Hi Mohd,
what a cute girl,what a nice compo.I liked vivid colours.TFS.Necla.

hi mohd, awesome colors and depth of field here, wonderful clarity in the girl, well done, thanks scott

salam bang
wah cantik eh macam tkluar bah gambar ani...

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 555 W: 34 N: 55] (7076)
  • [2008-02-11 18:57]
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Dear Mohd Rozaimi Hj Abd Rahman,
a very cute portrait of the lovely girl. her pose is like a little model.
and this lighting is nice to fit with this pink and red colors.
in my feeling, she looks a little in the strain, a little more natural pose may be better...
thank you,
Akihisa

Askum Sahabat
Nice portrait and very cute smile
Beautiful colors and good composition
Nice pose with a great using natural lighting
Well done

TFS
iimanyus

Hi dear friend,
and you are back with a lovely posting!
What a pleasure to admire this joyful posting.
Great look on her happy face. TFS
Have a lovely week.
Ioana
:) soon

Salam Bang,
Nah ketinggalan tah ku kan mempost gambar ani..hehehe..k2 bang..
Shot dan komposisi yang cantik juga color detailnya juga cantik lah..ente banyak suka la ana punya foto ini lah..beautifull lah..

Ana salute lah,
Anan lah..:)

helo anan!
beautiful portrait with excellent colors and sharpness.
i like it.
tfs
zoran

pt

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  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1866 W: 127 N: 3024] (16581)
  • [2008-02-12 12:41]
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What a cutie pie... she is gorgous, tell Din he have a very pretty daughter for me. :D Excellent pose, I like the colours she use, it brighten up the whole shot, nice colour and it make the whole shot look "happy"!

Cheers,
Sweety

Hello Mohd :o)

Excellent portrait. Nice shot full of colours.
The little girl is so cute ... i love to see happiness on children'faces, thanks for sharing that my dear friend.
Best wishes
Marylou

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