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wedding ring


wedding ring
Photo Information
Copyright: ali hamzah (alee8891) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 18 W: 2 N: 5] (365)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-06-20
Categories: Event
Camera: fujifilm s3pro, sigma 18-50 f2.8 macro
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/60 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-06-22 17:57
Viewed: 259
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hello TL
today post is just a simple wedding potret showing wedding rings of the bride, not much PP work just enhance using curve, resize and post. comment and critique are welcome..
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Critiques [Translate]

Ali

composición e idea original te felicito

  • Great 
  • mamcg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 153 W: 27 N: 91] (3441)
  • [2008-06-22 19:50]
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Ali well focused and composed as the bride is in veil looks very beautiful but did not understand the spot near her nose, TFS.

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  • SmD Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 10 W: 0 N: 14] (85)
  • [2008-06-23 2:52]
  • [+]

Hi Ali,

Good idea of showing the wedding ring. Well focus on the ring and nice back ground.

TFS

SmD

Hello Ali,
Original idea and carried out in an effective way. Your shallow depth of field and focus really work here... A (small) minus: this shallow DOF makes the ornament on her nose look more like a (detracting) spot (you could have cloned it out), but my overall evaluation of your picture and creativity is clearly positive ;o).
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

Salam Bro,
Very nice captured and good detail with nice bokeh BG..

CM

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