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• ScottHale (3962)
• [2008-06-30 7:31]

Azlyn,
First of all, Welcome to Trek Lens!
A couple of things that might "better" this photo:
1. Include the who subject when you don't tight crop.
2. More notes are helpful. I don't know how this photo is a wedding photo. I see no bride, no groom, no ring...nothing to indicate a wedding.
I do like the way you put your name on it but I prefer to keep it smaller because it distracts from the photo itself if it's too big.
I don't want to discourage you from posting here, I am sure you will like Trek Lens. Good luck,
Scott

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• alee8891 (363)
• [2008-06-30 19:52]

SALAM BRO
WELCOME TO TL
KALAW NAMPAK MUKA KANAK2 ANIKETAWA N CERIA CANTIK NI BRO BTW KEEP ON TL JANGAN MCM KEDIAKU SKEJAP ADA SKEJAP TADA HEHEHE...

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• CyberMeritam (1773)
• [2008-07-01 1:21]

Asalamualaikum Bro,
Selamat Datang Ke Dunia Photography..site ini cukup bagus untuk kita belajar..pertama ia nya free...kedua ramai teman2 disini yang suka sharing,..the technique,skills and experience..
For my advice,kalau photo2 bro yang bro posting suka di berikan kritikan dan komen,sila tah abis kita melayari foto2 teman2 yang ada di TL ani jua..(my opinion tu bro).kalau nda sunyi bro foto tani atu..hehe.Pelan2 saja bro..

Anyway bro,this picture not bad at all,IMHO the hand and the upper head a bit cut..too tight cropped..I do agree with Scott.

So i hope you enjoy posting,writing and viewing the pictures in TL.

Salam Kenal,
CM

:) tomorrow

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• SmD (85)
• [2008-07-01 4:39]

Hai Azlyn

Welcome to TL.
The 1st photo andang nya balum panas...
For the photo, i suggest that you need to find an angle that you can show the face of the little boy.

Keep on posting..
SmD