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• chendis (5172)
• [2009-09-27 8:40]

Hi Dilshan

this is adorable
what caught my attention is for sure her eyes but also the title
splendid light and details
such a grate portrait
grate idea for B&W and also grate idea for letting her blue earrings
Wish her health and happiness you have a beautiful girl :)
All my best wishes for you too
Oana

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• Silvio2006 (42675)
• [2009-09-27 8:49]

Ciao Dishan, wonderful B&W portrait with lovely model, fantastic eyes and splendid expression, very well done, ciao Silvio

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• roges (4850)
• [2009-09-27 8:52]

Hi Dilshan,

Exceptional portrait. And the colors you chose B & W give a more ... mysterious. I like very much.
Have a pleasant Sunday,
Adrian

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• shaukatmi (3597)
• [2009-09-27 9:01]

Hi, Dilshan. Nice intimate portrait of this young girl with a tight crop adding to the composition. Her eyes look great and the little fingers and her innocence is presented very well. Congratulations. Cheers and TFS.

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• teamill (5212)
• [2009-09-27 9:30]

Fantastic Dilshan ... what a beautiful little girl you have.
Love this pose .. her little chin resting on her hands on the edge of the table .. waiting patiently for her breakfast. Nice sidelight, and a beautiful shine in her beautiful eyes!
Great shot
Trudy

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• rewshearer (20919)
• [2009-09-27 12:04]

I like this, the expression, the catchlights in her eyes, and the tight framing you have created.

I'm not 100% convinced that the focus is properly on her leading eye (her right, our left.)

Light is very nice!
Rew

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• skhawar (2220)
• [2009-09-27 20:09]

Excellent work, beautiful composition, well done. Good ideea and great light and shadows.nice tones.
Best regards
khawar

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• AKITA (12330)
• [2009-09-27 21:44]

dear Dilshan Mahdi,
her eyes are impressive,
a calm portrait shot of her common life face,
her interest looks being bread and butter indeed.
this quietly watching and waiting figure is very polite and charming.
thank you for your nice natural shot,
Akihisa

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• milas (32791)
• [2009-09-28 0:54]

merhaba Dilshan...
ne güzel bir portre çalışması, harika görünüyor...selamlar

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• Kilted-Arab (9477)
• [2009-09-28 18:04]
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Hi Dilshan - was the earring left blue intentionally? It stands out for me and I'm not totally convinced about it - it's a nice pp technique but possibly for this shot I'd prefer all in b/w.

The expression and pose are very good, nicely captured and I love the touch with her wee fingers and the light striking the side of her face. Could possibly be a touch sharper, but overall a lovely shot of your beautiful little girl.

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• Teresat (8585)
• [2009-09-29 1:16]

Bom dia dilshan
Wonderful expression of this beautiful girl. Good b7w work
My regards
T.
Ps I read now your note... your daughter is really beautiful.

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• SavIra (179)
• [2009-09-30 0:36]

what beautiful children!!!!

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• moli (12114)
• [2009-10-10 10:28]

Hello Dilshan.
Beautiful portrait of little girl here.
Well presented. Great focus and her pose.
Congratulations.
Janek Kloss