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Copyright: Andika Biru (eml623) (28)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-10-10
Categories: Nature
Exposure: f/4, 1/125 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-10-11 22:11
Viewed: 106
Points: 0
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Zoom in lovely pink flowers of local fruit Jambu Merah.
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To dilshan74: Learning moreeml623 2 10-20 17:20
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Salam Andika,

The main focal point (assuming it is the main flower) is not sharp here with no defined details. Shooting against the strong back light has created a very low contrast shot. The Background is also too "busy" here and a shallower DOF may have enabled you to blur out the unwanted distractions. Later you could crop tighter to highlight the flower. To solve the lighting issue, you could have used the forced flash option here or simply recomposed your shot and taken this from another POV/angle. Hope this helps and provides you some constructive feedback.

Cheers,

Dilshan

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