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Leakena, outdoor shoot #5


Leakena, outdoor shoot #5
Photo Information
Copyright: Sothy Eng (sothy81) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 97 W: 13 N: 63] (661)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-09-26
Categories: Friends/Family, Portrait
Camera: Canon 350 D, Canon EF 200mm f/2.8L USM
Exposure: f/3.2, 1/250 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-09-27 20:52
Viewed: 195
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Leakena again. This year she is even getting hotter.
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  • psyce Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 170 W: 11 N: 96] (1597)
  • [2009-09-27 21:31]

nice DOF and the model seems to be comfortable infront of the cam.... I like the sharpness and skin tone of your photo... well done..TFS

Hi Sothy

Your post work has a very professional look to it, too smooth for my taste but definitely the stuff that sells. Saturation is strong and the dynamics are nicely even.

Pose is good although I'd have got rid of the wristwatch ... and in my humble opinion the tongue thing doesn't do much for the shot. I do like her hair, though!

Rew

Hello Sothy,
A cute pose and facial expression, enhanced by the smoothened environment you opted for. I like the detail of the tongue.
However, to me, the wristwatch your model is wearing really clashes with this general mood. It draws our attention and makes the photo look quite anecdotical, whereas it has more potential than that, I think. I would have asked the model to remove it... for the sake of Photography! ;o)
Of course, this is only my personal opinion. Feel free to (dis)agree ;o).
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

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