Theary Chou in Swimsuit # 3

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• dilshan74 (2371)
• [2009-11-03 20:05]

Hmmmm...the good first:

1) Great pose and expression of Theary who I must say, has a stunning physique and daring beauty.

2)Exposure and DOf are excellent

The bad:

1)Composition is where this one falls short- I think by cutting out her elbow and arm on the right side of the frame has taken away the "fullness" of the image and the head position in the frame is too cramped. A bit more breathing space here would have helped.

2) My monitor is about to catch fire...better get the extinguisher ready...

Very good work otherwise and keep it up-no pun intended!

Cheers,

Dilshan

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• rewshearer (20999)
• [2009-11-03 23:41]

Definitely like your light and colours in this shot. Great use of location, perfect light - was it a cloudy day?

The missing chunk of arm is a little bothersome, but not the end of the world. Likewise the slightly-clipped head isn't a major - I think it would be unnoticed if not for the way her head is slightly dipped and forward, as if the frame of the photograph is pushing down on her.

Those are very minor things though - I like this!

Rew