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bird's eye view of a freight tricycle


bird's eye view of a freight tricycle
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Copyright: Ted Janzen (T_Janzen) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 74 W: 15 N: 48] (750)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-05-20
Categories: Transportation
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-02-17 13:10
Viewed: 480
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This guy was taking a siesta outside of a shopping centre, in between deliveries. A staircase went up along the opposite side of the wall you can see on the left, which gave me a bird's eye view.
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I remember critiquing this shot the last time you posted it, here.

I liked it then, I like it now, but perhaps this should have been made as a 'repost.'

Rew

Hi Ted,
I like this picture, it's natural, Nice shot.

My regards, Susan

Hi Ted,

Love such frames! nice one!

Cheers,
Ranjith

I genuinely like the POV you chose. The composition of the picture is very original. Figure from the figure is almost Christlike. Imagine the person hanging on a wall, rather than lying in his sleigh.

I will still comment, I find that the image is a little too smooth, as if you had a little too used a filter to reduce noise. But it's your choice and I think it's a good image.

Good picture,
Best regards.

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1390 W: 31 N: 3028] (12222)
  • [2009-02-22 7:46]

HI Ted
Good composition and good idea to include the pedals of the trycicle, otherwise this would be just a flat iron bed.

The feet, legs, and left arm, and face show a bit of blurriness. Nevertheless its a good shot and perfect for the theme.

Just a bit of a tip.
Oversharpening will give you a halo, you are better to sharpen slightly and if needed go back with the sharpening brush set at low settings.
Dot

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