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Copyright: chen yulin (yulin999) (43)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-07-02
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/4, 1/250 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-09-03 1:04
Viewed: 760
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
那天和朋友一起在山顶上看日出。。
感觉很不错，在下山时经过一个寺庙，阳光打在墙上，很微暗的天空有种冷软色调的对比，感觉还不错。
但是仍然觉的这张照的不是很好，我无法发现哪里不好。
请朋友们能够告诉我，谢谢
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  • tcht Silver Star Critiquer [C: 28 W: 4 N: 9] (97)
  • [2006-09-03 2:18]

Hi Yulin
It's definitely worth waking early, you've got such a nice light here. I enjoy the framing you've got and the compo is very good.
Overall a nice pic, but if I'm to nit-pick I'd go for the sharpness and angle. The chairs next to the temple appear to be too soft and I'd certainly be interested in seeing more of the temple. I don't think you are using a zoom lens, so I suggest next time you use an aperture of at least f.7 to crank up the overall sharpness. Nice work. Thanks for sharing.
Regards,
CheukHin

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