a winter day

Critiques [Translate]

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• jimmyjimmy (1064)
• [2009-10-21 3:02]

Hello Andreu

Great subject to work with. The center POV does not help this image. I would move it to the left or right. Still an interesting image.

Regards
Jimmy

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• ErikSven (2299)
• [2009-10-21 3:06]

Welcome to TrekLens, Andreu.
The minimalistic composition and colour treatment surely help to convey the cold and lonely winter mood. But, above all, you choose exactly the right tree: its "amputated arms" look poignant and make us almost feel the "pain" of loneliness.
The centered composition, combined with the low horizon, works well in this particular case, because it efficiently underlines the utter emptiness surrounding the tree.
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

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• pozaru (19118)
• [2009-10-21 3:09]

Welcome to TL !

Wonderful moody picture
I'm not a big fan of the centered compos but I think that here it really works

thanks
v
ps.Sorry, I've switched off the points system

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• rudla (2818)
• [2009-10-21 10:55]

Lonlyness...gret mood on this photo.Centered compo works well here :)
best regards,
V

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• karl (726)
• [2009-10-30 18:17]

I really like very much the way you manage light, space and the sensations related to the image language. I really imagine this picture being in a big frame hanging in a wall, so you can grab all the light comming from it.
congratulations !