Reading by the River

Critiques [Translate]

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• chrisJ (42045)
• [2009-09-17 3:05]

Hi Murray

Superb graphism & sharpness with wonderful reflections. I like the minimalist colour. Don't remind me of winter ahead, pls. It's bitterly cold here in Korea, too! The woman reading makes a splendid focal point. Tfs!

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• roges (4643)
• [2009-09-17 4:55]

Hi Murray,
Very beautiful picture it.
A portrait and a landscape very beautiful and very well played.
Have a quiet day,
Adrian

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• rewshearer (20799)
• [2009-09-17 15:50]
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Hideously challenging lighting conditions here Murray - wow. A white jacket, hit by the sun, creates a double challenge when you're trying to meter for a lowered face in shadow!

There is potential here but I think unrealised, at least to the extent of many of your more successful others. The shot as is could certainly be cropped to eliminate some of the unnecessary background elements - the far bank of the river, for example.

More to the point, though, I think this is one of those situations where the photographer should think - "ok, it's all or nothing! If I get this shot it's going to be good!" - and actually ask the subject for her portrait.

Easy enough even with the language barrier - you just get a little closer, show the camera, smile, and will get a nod or a head-shake. If it's the former, you can get away 4 or 5 shots and have the advantage of being able to get close and intimate. If it's the latter, you've at least set a precedent for next time. :)

Rew

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• akg (964)
• [2009-09-18 3:32]

Hello Murray,

I like the concept of the composition and the simple title that you choose.
Fantastic work!

TFS, abhijit.

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• john1 (1477)
• [2009-09-18 4:00]

Hello Murray,

Excellent quiet landscape , great composition.
Nice colors and reflection, very sharp details .
Wonderfull shot with the lady.
Best regards.
john