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• psyce (1495)
• [2009-09-13 0:13]

great composition... i like the edge of the frame leading to her.... well done... TFS

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• cunejo200 (17307)
• [2009-09-13 5:07]

Hello Murray,
I had thought that this was a double portrait at first. Excellent vivid colors, there is good texture from the canvas, you metered this well. Regards...
Danilo

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• suzy (4336)
• [2009-09-13 8:56]

hi Murray..

this is certainly an eyecatching painting in my opinion and you certainly captured the colors and all the details and textures in a beautiful frame, so vivid and so appealing..I like the blue against the yellow golden color.. beautiful presentation..

best wishes
suzy

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• rewshearer (20771)
• [2009-09-13 14:50]

Nice simple portrait of this waitress - personally I wouldn't have photographed her by the painting though, it competes for attention; I would recommend one or the other.

Skin tones look a little blue, your camera may have chosen an indoor/incandescent white-balance setting while the main light source was actually natural daylight ...?

Rew

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• rminkow (15209)
• [2009-09-13 19:33]

Hi Murray....nice shot...great details and tones...nice work.

Roger