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Flower
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| Photo Information |
| Copyright: ying ying (kellyying) (64) |
| Genre: Places |
| Medium: Color |
| Date Taken: 2009-01-22 |
| Categories: Nature |
| Exposure: f/2.8, 1/50 seconds |
| More Photo Info: [view] |
| Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop |
| Date Submitted: 2009-01-26 16:56 |
| Viewed: 278 |
| Points: 1 |
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| [Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note |
| I don't know what name is this flower?it was take in the flower fair. |
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(317) - [2009-01-26 17:29]
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Ying Ying
Nice color seems a little out of focus but the time stamp needs to go. I looked in your gallery some great photos i am surprised they did not do better.
Jeff
Very bright colours but I think there are some issues with the picture which if addressed would turn it from a nice shot into a vastly better one -
* the composition is very unbalanced and seems ill thought out - the flower is out of the frame at the bottom but has lots of space on the top and sides. It's placement in the frame neither works on it's symmetry nor on creating a truly off centre composition
* the focus is a little soft in the centre of the flower
* the picture itself is small - if possible make better use of TL's size restrictions of 800pxls and 300kb size
* the timestamp in the bottom of the frame is very distracting.
I've created a small workshop to show how some of these elements could be change to create a more striking picture (I hope you don't mind)
Thanks....Mark
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