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Worship
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Copyright: TH Yuen (thy) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 15 W: 4 N: 1] (178)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-10-11
Categories: Decisive Moment
Exposure: f/9.0, 1/640 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-10-14 16:39
Viewed: 97
Points: 0
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To dilshan74: OKthy 1 10-15 07:30
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I find this a bit disturbing, because of the slightly tilted horizon and because of the lack of space on the left (where the woman is facing) and all of the empty space on the right.

Even the best camera in the world; whether it be brand A-Z does not make good photographs if the end user is not creative in engaging their potential. The camera/equipment is only a tool and it is vital to understand this. This is not a good photograph if I may be truly honest without being offensive. It lacks a focal point, is compositionally weak and seems a rushed shutter bug style snap. Some times no amount of PP work can save an image and this is the case here. I think a different perspective and/or creative lighting technique would have given you a worthy starting point worth editing/uploading and it has not done that this time. We are all learning and I hope you take this as a constructive starting point to really look at the world and think before you hit that shutter.

regards,

Dilshan

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