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Little red riding hood.


Little red riding hood.
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Copyright: merwede maritz (monique) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 21 W: 0 N: 4] (197)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-08
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2004-10-18 6:20
Viewed: 833
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is a better attempt of Model photography. My previous picture got a lot of comments on the models bad skin. I used the healing brush tool to take out she bad skin.
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This is better indeed Merwede. She is pretty and deserves it to be portrayed that way! Maybe sometimes you can do a close up on her eyes? They seem beautiful!

  • Great 
  • Quark Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1339 W: 10 N: 29] (66)
  • [2004-10-18 12:19]

Great portrait, lovely model and her posing is very good, fine "red" colours, nice shot !

  • Great 
  • Neige Gold Star Critiquer [C: 610 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2004-10-18 13:14]

This is an excellent attempt to portrait in almost natural light (i think?). Colors are nice, i like the red tones used here. About the skin, you may use NeatImage taking some care, none of the default settings giving nice result for skin, so you have to play with the different triggers. - You have done well here, manually, with the brush tool. Only missing thing is more light on her.

i like the colors here with the very good composition..the only thing Iwuold change is the skin tone , make it some softer and add some indirect lighting..make her some more glamoures..tried to do this in a ws...regards Leon

Lovely model, great colors and clarity. This is a wonderful portrait. Well done.

A softer photograph will and I tried a workshop ?
Did you use a field in flash ? It may have helped .
otherwise a very nice expression in the eyes and a great background .

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