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Paper Parasol


Paper Parasol
Photo Information
Copyright: Fred NEF (Freddie) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1620 W: 125 N: 1189] (6200)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2002-04-04
Categories: Artwork
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-03-04 13:33
Viewed: 779
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Paper Parasol

A wee bit out of focus but I just want to share it w/ you. I hope you still like it! :)

Pp: cropped, cloned, desaturated for nostalgia, sharpened, and downsized :)
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Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To littleshel: Thanxxx!Freddie 1 07-31 05:57
To marietom: Merci beaucoup!Freddie 1 06-09 06:08
To ScottHale: Hi!Freddie 2 03-05 11:12
To deanophotos: Hi!Freddie 2 03-05 09:09
To hamperium: Hi!Freddie 1 03-05 04:05
To arzu: Hi!Freddie 1 03-04 21:28
To jowhitee: Hi!Freddie 1 03-04 21:26
To dflydsgns: Hi!Freddie 1 03-04 14:13
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Hello Freddie...

Really nice framing of this parasol. It really seems to radiate. My only quibble would be that it doesnt seem to be in focus, perhaps it was moving? Either way, its a lovely photo. Thanks for sharing it!

Sophia

  • Great 
  • arzu Silver Star Critiquer [C: 10 W: 0 N: 1] (81)
  • [2007-03-04 14:45]
  • [+]

the colours are a little bit palish. But it's a very nice composition

Good composition but needs sharpening, maybe oof. TFs
jowhite

keep looking up Freddie
u made a good picture out of it
i like this shot
tfs
Marco

Freddie,
I like the idea here and the composition but the colors seem to be a bit muted and the parasol is a bit blurred. It's not bad, in fact it's better than most parasol shots. Could the parasol be in motion because on my last shot a lady was spinning hers and although the face was focused the parasol wasn't completely in focus.
I also like the tight framing.
Scott

Great lines and a well exposed image. I like the way you have placed the center of the parasol on the thirds, the whole image really works well!!

Superbe graphisme, très bien composé.
Marie

Wow. beautoful framing. I like this a lot.. you have been to so many places!
TFS
Michelle

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