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| Photo Information |
Copyright: Ted Janzen (T_Janzen)
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| Genre: People |
| Medium: Color |
| Date Taken: 2008-05-29 |
| Categories: Daily Life, Portrait |
| Exposure: f/3.2 |
| Photo Version: Original Version |
| Date Submitted: 2008-05-31 7:26 |
| Viewed: 205 |
| Points: 0 |
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| [Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note |
I posted a photo the other day of the kindergarten's new nap room--a gym with 180 child-sized bunks. This is the occupant of one bunk.
PP: cropped, levels |
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Hi Ted
You've delivered some beautiful and touching photographs but I have to be really honest and say this isn't one of them.
As worthy as the topic may be, the central placement of the girl, the flat lighting, the unconvincing cropping and the motion-blurred girl in pink all take away any of the sense of purpose and subject that many of your photos show.
I look forward to seeing more from you!
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