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Yellow Dalia


Yellow Dalia
Photo Information
Copyright: ariben daniels (aribendaniels) (128)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-02-20
Categories: Nature
Camera: Canon 400D Digital, 28-135 f/3.5-5.6 IS, 72 mm UV
Exposure: f/10.0, 1/400 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-04-01 5:57
Viewed: 793
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This was at the garden of the the Guest House at Pachmarhi.
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  • Lay Gold Star Critiquer [C: 99 W: 0 N: 5] (443)
  • [2009-04-02 9:23]
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Hi Ariben,
wonderful Dalia, very good macro excellent sharpness and great colour., very well done
Regard,
Maria

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  • Koala Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 391 W: 32 N: 90] (4023)
  • [2009-04-03 12:39]
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very nice flower and very well captured :D

Have a great weekend!

Alexandra

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2027 W: 147 N: 3408] (13641)
  • [2009-04-05 8:39]

hi Ariben

A nice macro shot of the flower using backlit style, although I think you may perhaps increase the brightness level by +5 and do a bit of sharpening before upload? Sometimes resize and compression into jpg results in a little loss of quality. You may also wish to add a bit of contrast and saturation level to it.

In your choice of f/10, of course, you would have considered shallow DOF to give good bokeh effect to BG blur? Choosing an angle of shot perhaps may also be very important factor to isolate the flower and avoid any distracting element.

If you are new to EDIT software, take a good look at some my listed recommendations of free downloads in my PfB series of themes here, if it can be of help to you.

Good work.

Greetings from Borneo.
tfs, bill

Hi Ariben,

Very nice flower, nice colors and lighting.

Only wish it was facing the camera.

Sreya

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