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Girl II


Girl II
Photo Information
Copyright: Maciej Pilniewicz (pilnik) Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 8 W: 24 N: 13] (497)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-09-24
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/250 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-10-13 1:39
Viewed: 77
Points: 4
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i like this

Great portrait here only let down by the cluttered BG on the top left of the frame with rail bars appearing to detract the emphasis on the main subject. There is also some OE of the skin due to the direct side light and the sharpness could also be a bit better. Perhaps a photographers note would have also helped here to show your intentions and reasons for your photo. Hope you find my suggestions constructive. Good expression captured here and I congratulate you for that.

regards,

Dilshan

A really very nice photo of this little one posing in the sunshine for you. She's got an adorable face with a great smile...and one little tooth missing there. Her clothing is very colorful and blends nicely with background a bit, too. Very nicely done.

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