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Golden temple


Golden temple
Photo Information
Copyright: Nipunjot kaur Soni (nipunjotsoni) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 77 W: 53 N: 106] (836)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-10-21
Categories: Architecture
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-11-27 4:30
Viewed: 272
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 25
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Golden Temple Amritsar
Around the world, to non-Sikhs the Harimander Sahib is, perhaps, better known by its English 'sobriquet' - a name given to the Temple because of the lavish gold plating that adorns the walls of its two upper floors, which include its dome, the airy Shish Mahal, where three Gurus spent many hours, and its minarettes.


Shining in the Day light, the gilded splendour of its panelling, big dome and small minarets, this temple is a fairy world palace to the devotees of the Sikh faith. Certainly, the first look brings onto the innocent eye the image of a transcendent fact. The 'loving sight' peering into heaven from the legends of the miraculous cures by the touch of the water in the pool of nectar, in which the shrine stands makes for ecstatic awareness. The vision has been received by millions of pilgrims who have come here for centuries from near and far."

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Hi Nipun,
What a beautiful arctitectural photo vith excellent POV and perspective.TFS.
Namastey,

hAyAti

Hi Nipunjot
this is another wonderful shot and i decide to add this photo in my favourite
paolo

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  • papon Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 35 W: 38 N: 70] (541)
  • [2008-11-27 8:49]

Hi Nipun!!
Nice POV..Great detail of the Temple.
The sky looks very whitish..and you could make a different frame..
This frame is not matching with this photograph...anyway it's my view only....:-)

Thanks,
Sunandan.

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  • Saba Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 498 W: 0 N: 1396] (8377)
  • [2008-11-27 9:42]

Witaj Nipunjot!
Very oryginal and curious architecture.
Beautiful photo...very nice capture.
Great colors and detalis.
Very well presented.
Greetings.
Barbara

Bonjour Nipun,
Une architecture remarquable, merci pour la note.
Dommage que la personne apparaisse en FG, soit ne pas l'inclure dans ta composition, soit le montrer plus... je ne sais pas... j'ai essayé un ws :)
Bonne journée

Karèle

Hi, I would agree with all the previous critiques. Nevertheless it is good composition. Cropping would be required to focus on the Temple. Also image is bit tilted.

I have tried to do WS on the image, hope you like lt.

Regards,
Jayesh

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1198 W: 0 N: 2344] (19400)
  • [2008-11-28 1:33]
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Hello,

superbe vue ce ce bâtiment avec de beaux reflets, de belle couleurs dorées, j'aime beaucoup le personnage, avec sa tête qui sort de l'angele, superbe.

Bravo et amitié

Nicou

Hello Nipunjot,
Good composition and well suited frame
I advice adding a bit contrast
TFS
Selahattin E

Hi again Nipun!
This time I write a happier critique than the previous one, but I was devastated for the news...
Wonderful building in nice golden colours, but I would remark two things: the sky is overexposed because of the strong light, I think you could have tried the shot with other metring and shutter speed. Tha other is the head of the man at the bottom. In my opinion, the composition would be better without it. Anyway, just personal suggestions. :)
Great architecture! TFS.
Have a nice weekend!
Kristof

Good photo,Nipun.Well framed.You have given a good note also.But thre are some minor distractions, like the overexposed sky and the man with the turban,in particular. Ive made a minor alteration to ur photo ,in a WS edit.

TFS
-Neuro_Toxin

VERY NICE SHOT.WITH A LITTLE TILT AND A BIT OF CONTRAST IT WILL IMPROVE A LOT.BESTWISHES.

LAITU

Hi Nipunjot,
Not a bad shot, but still important flaws. First it overexposed, by doing so the edges of the beautiful building in the back are definited, and picture lacks contrast. The pictures is slightly tilted to the left.
Now as for that men standing infront at the bottom of the picture, I think it doesn't work well with the picture. It draw to much attention from what should be your focal point..the building. I've attempt a workshop, hope you'll like.

Hi Nipun ,
very impressive place , lovely shot
regards
Arik

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