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• mingchiu (889)
• [2008-12-04 19:38]

Hello Dr Jatin.This is a well taken shot. In the language of photography, i find the exposure is perfect, the depth of filed is great with a f/10 aperture, a almost optimum level with a f4/ lens. Lighting on the left that shined on the building added an extra value to the place of interest i.e. the Golden Temple. One set back perhaps, if i may put my critique on would be the child. I would wait for he head to turn to my camera with perhaps her both her arms extending to attempt at the birds , which i think would create a more active and decisive moment for the picture. It would further complement the movement of her foot work. Thanks for sharing.

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• shubhibanerjee (1729)
• [2008-12-04 19:42]

Wow Jatin what a capture! I really loved the motion in the picture. The expressions and body language of baby gal is very enchanting.
colors look good! Very original composition!

Cheers,
Shubhi:)

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• captive-light (811)
• [2008-12-04 23:26]
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I think her positioning is just about perfect, and balanced by the pigeons, background is a little cluttered but you can't help that. If she had been looking at the camera I think the image would have been stronger, but you would have lost the interaction with the birds.