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Flying High


Flying High
Photo Information
Copyright: Jatin Talwar (jatintalwar) (99)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-01-12
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Canon 350D (Digital Rebel XT), Canon 17 - 40 mm f/4.0 L, Hoya 77mm circular-polarizer
Exposure: f/8, 1/50 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-01-18 18:58
Viewed: 279
Points: 13
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi all .....
THis is a recent shot taken on my trip to Amritsar , Punjab on the ocassion of Lodi ...This festival is celebrate here with great enthusiasm , People on their terris enjoying kite flying
This was my brother in law with his kite , Please note that the forearms are moving hence captured like this ....
All these spots seen in the sky are colorful kites flying high in the sky . This was shot in the eveing with setting sun and that golden light ....
Your comments and critiques required for improvements .....

Regards
Dr.Jatin Talwar

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Hello Jatin! Hope you are doing good!
Happy New Year To YOu And YOur Family. MAy All Your Wishes and Dreams Come True!

It's a capture of great mood of the festival. the golden kite looks striking against the dark contrast of blue shades.Also liked the dramatic sky! Well your note suggests that it was a sunset time but still wish if there was a bit more light here!

Nice POV!
Good composition!

Have A Wonderful Week Ahead!
Cheers,
Shubhi:)

Hi,
Good Photo,Jatin.Well composed and a nice blend of colours.I think u need to increase the overall brighness a lil.

Have a Nice Day :)
-Neuro_Toxin

I agree with Neuro Toxin - nice shot, well composed with a novel point of view. Needs a little more brightness. I will Workshop this to test.
Just tried to upload workshop but have reached today's upload limit. Will do it tomorrow.
Terry

Nice view Jatin, but as has already been said the image is far too dark. Also I think that this would be a lot better in portrait view.. With the focal length that you used you could get the whole of the man in and the kite.. You may have to move around a little to do that but then it wouldn't have a 'chopped' off look to it..

Rgds
David

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  • [2009-01-18 21:18]

I also agree with Neuro Toxin and tezza - nice shot, well composed with a novel point of view. Needs a little more brightness.

Tin Soe

nice shot sir

really like the composition

Regards
Deepak

Good POV and good composition of shot here.

Lighter levels might have been good ... I find it somewhat too subdued.

Rew

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