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• Neuro_Toxin (283)
• [2009-07-17 8:19]
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Hi
Good photo,Mohd Tabrez Alam .You have captured the joyful mood ,well. However ,I think its tightly cropped. A lil more headroom and breathing space ,especially at the left side, wud have enhaced the overall beauty of this picture ,further.

TFS
Have a NiceDay :)
-Neuro_Toxin

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• gabbypal (5316)
• [2009-07-17 9:05]

Neuro Toxin is right albeit a little too uptight. Still... a good photo. I like it. Cheers. Janos

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• erdna (5421)
• [2009-07-17 10:25]

A pretty picture but I agree with Neuro that it is cropped too tight. It makes me feel you are suffocating the girls.

Andre'

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• chendis (4958)
• [2009-07-17 10:54]

Hi Mohd
well maybe this can be improve better
first of all i agree Neuro next you have to try a cooling filter or color balance because the left girl seems have green face
also try a little more saturation if you want to represent the festival of colors
other wise beautiful girls the first from the right and the second from the left have beautiful face and smile
Don t give up!
Have a grate WE

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• skhawar (2220)
• [2009-07-17 12:17]

This is a nice photo....
Clear, sharp with nice colours.

Very good work. TFS.

Best Regards,
Khawar