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Copyright: SP Srivastava (spsips) (100)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-11
Categories: Nature
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-09-06 1:18
Viewed: 170
Points: 10
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A rose in my garden.
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  • Niva Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1146 W: 2 N: 838] (10395)
  • [2009-09-06 1:23]
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Hello Srivastava
Thatīs a fine shot , unique !Very nice!
The black background was a good idea.
TFS.
Brazilian Greetings,
Nivaldo

Hello SP,

A finely captured rose with good light and good dof.

Because your rose is so central, it seems a good idea to crop from the left. However, it would be nice to have the stem leading into the shot, so this is a good time for over-border composition where there is no cropping but the flower is no longer central.
I will do a littl ew/s to explain what I mean.

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

excellent frame composition, texture, very good first plane, congratulations, hugs

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  • akg Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 163 W: 0 N: 83] (962)
  • [2009-09-06 10:27]

Hi Srivastava,
This is very special. I like the sweet soft colour and light. Fine work.
TFS, abhijit.

Hi SP:
An excellent capture, and like the filtering lights that are coming through the petals that add so much to your beautiful rose:)
I do see some grains in your DOF area and have done a WS for you to consider. I would like to see info on your camera & exposures to give you help & suggessions better.
An excellent capture!!!
David

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