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Wish You Were Here


Wish You Were Here
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Copyright: Shubhi Banerjee (shubhibanerjee) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 173 W: 37 N: 309] (1729)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-12-17
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/50 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-12-18 2:58
Viewed: 293
Points: 34
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
The fragrance of our love runs through my heart
Silent hours sing our tale and a voice rings in from far
I so much want you to hold me in and care
I so much wish, wish you were here!

The night has passed and dawn has made its start
I’m sitting in the winter chill to listen to your laugh
I so much want you to kiss my smiles and share my fears
I so much wish, wish you were here!

Well a little somber mood of the post and composition in this festive time.
Hope you still bear with it and come up with suggestions!

Tech Talks
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-Cropping
-slight Soft Focus

Lots of hopes and smiles,
Shubhi

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  • jorgi Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 57 W: 38 N: 33] (519)
  • [2008-12-18 3:07]
  • [+]

Hi Shubhi,

uf...pure poetry captured thru photography...
The light...soft sheets, soften blur...and almost a touch...trully poetic.
The joy within the light careless about darkened areas...as long as he/she is there...Simply beautiful.

My compliments,
Jeri

Hi Dear Shubhi
Great pleasure for me that today shot come together!
Superb lighting, fantastic mood, Excellent PP work.
Really enjoyable...
Kind Regards, Alireza.

hi Shubhi,

a nice work again.i really like this and i'm missing my wife backhome because of this image..=)
i like the way you blur it! well done!

tfs,
raven

Very ncie shot Shubhi

Really like the concept and POV

light is perfect

You in Delhi....

Regards
Deepak

Hi Shubhi
wonderful composition and lovly tones
great effect of the light on the hand
perfect frmed by the shadow
good work

Wish you were here (Pink Floyd)
So, so you think you can tell Heaven from Hell,
blue skies from pain.
Can you tell a green field from a cold steel rail?
A smile from a veil?
Do you think you can tell?
And did they get you to trade your heroes for ghosts?
Hot ashes for trees?
Hot air for a cool breeze?
Cold comfort for change?
And did you exchange a walk on part in the war for a lead role in a cage?
How I wish, how I wish you were here.
We're just two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl, year after year,
Running over the same old ground.
What have you found? The same old fears.
Wish you were here.

Hi Subhi,
What a stunnining image vith superb lighting, colours and composition.TFS.
Regards,

hAyAti

Very moody and intriguing shot!! Great lighting, great idea, and a nice note.

Well done.
TFS

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  • papon Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 35 W: 38 N: 70] (541)
  • [2008-12-18 9:08]
  • [+]

Hi Shubhi!!
Well composed shot...Excellent lighting and nice POV.
Congratulations!!

Sunandan.

Fantastic work, delicate and nice!

Malik & Mary.

Hi Shubhi beautiful image good light & shadow. I can't go through your poem because I left my wife backhome 2 days ago as I returned back to U.A.E.
TFS regards - Adil.

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  • KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 448 W: 103 N: 592] (2731)
  • [2008-12-18 22:23]

Hi Shubhi
Geart view of expressing moods, well composed and Superb use of light :)
Congratulations on good post.
Well done
TFS

Cheers
JZM

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2249 W: 172 N: 0] (29052)
  • [2008-12-19 2:52]

Hi Shubhi ;)
IMpressive part of sunshine...TFS
Have a lovely WE,
J ;)

Hope that special someone (your husband, maybe?) won't sty too long from you... I assume this is a self-picture?
The soft glow of the light, is something you've gotten us used to, by now, it gives you images that "special something", a great sense of intimacy.
Well done, Shubhi!
Diana

Hi shubhi,
Truly romantic. I am not married or neither i have a girl friend, but something makes me feel missing looking at this picture. Great mood. Beautiful

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  • bupga Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 302 W: 6 N: 366] (2709)
  • [2008-12-22 23:29]

Hi Shubhi,

This is one of your best for me. Well composed, the shadows and lights handled well. The used of F/2.8 enough to give you the depths that you wanted to achieved. Great shot.

tfs......Buddy

Nice use of light - this is definitely chiaroscuro! - and strong use of composition also.

Intriguing positions of the hand and foot, I find myself trying to figure out which appendage belongs to whom and what bodily contortions are required to get that image. In that respect, it presents a challenge to the viewer and is a most interesting shot.

Rew

Hi Shubhi

This is truly a stunning composition. Beautiful effect of the light, great illumination and metering. YOur use of soft focus has accentuated the sking tones very effectively.

Well done and tfs,

Martyn

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